Which sentence pattern is responsible for making the following paragraph choppy?
He got the invitation. He invited a friend to go with him. He called to respond to the invitation. He went to the party. His friend's name was not on the list. They went home.
Simple
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I rode my bike to the library. I got off my bike. The tire was flat. I tripped over the bike. I fell on my face. People laughed at me. I avoid the library now.
Simple
Having many small waves.
A variety of sentence pattern can alleviate choppy writing that halts and stops, create a more dynamic flow, and pique the reader's interest.
Prepositional phrases or participial phrases
Choppy, disturbed, wavy, non-relective or ruffled maybe.
choppy and disconnected.
Choppy waters obscured sight of land.I became seasick from the choppy waves.His words sound choppy and disjointed.
Sometimes sentences are worded in odd ways. In certain cases, the way a sentence is pieced together can make a whole paragraph sound choppy and unprofessional. Just switching around a few aspects of the sentence can make the entire paragraph flow much easier and sound more professional.
Having many small waves.
A variety of sentence pattern can alleviate choppy writing that halts and stops, create a more dynamic flow, and pique the reader's interest.
yes, it is perfectly fine to write a five paragraph essay on sharks. just don't use run-on sentences or choppy sentences.
Prepositional phrases or participial phrases
fluid? smooth? maybe those might help.
Choppy hair is a hairstyle.
The term choppy layers refers to a hairstyle that has choppy layers. Choppy layers add definition to a hairstyle. Choppy layers also draw attention to a person's facial features.
Choppy Warburton was born in 1842.
Choppy Warburton died in 1897.
We went swimming in the sea. The sea was calm/smooth/choppy/rough when we crossed the Channel.